Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Chapter 2 Is Up!

The second chapter of the story with no title is now available for your reading pleasure at http://www.orionstarmedia.com/foreststory/chapter_two.html. As requested earlier, please leave any comments or constructive criticism in the comments section of this post. I am currently most interested in critiques of my writing style, especially since this chapter moves between the main character's past and present. I have tried to make those transitions seamless yet recognizable, but since I know where they are already, I don't feel that I am a good judge of my own effectiveness at conveying them. Let me know what you think, and enjoy!

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