It's Finally Done!

Well, it's official. The second draft is finally complete. For those of you who have been following this from the beginning (or nearly), you can find the last chapter here, and the epilogue here. For those of you who have been waiting for me to finish before starting, you can find the first chapter here.

And now is finally the time for all that constructive feedback I know you have all been dying to give me! If possible, I would appreciate you posting it in the comments section of this blog post, so that I can easily respond and carry on a discussion with anyone willing to help me edit this thing. I know it needs a lot of work: I am already working on cleaning some sections of it up for the next draft, but I think that you should all know that I am getting more serious about publishing it by the day, and for that I really need any editorial help you would be willing to give me. So, if you loved it, let me know. If you hated it, let me know why. And if you think I could do something better or differently, don't be afraid to tell me so. Every good novel has an acknowledgements section after all; no one does this sort of thing alone. Thanks to all of you who have been hanging on my every word so far. Enjoy!