Friday, May 14, 2010

The Place For Comments

The next chapter of my story is up, and I find I am fast running out of things to say in a separate blog post for each chapter. I had hoped for more feedback on each chapter, but since that is not forthcoming, from now on this will be the place to post any and all comments about the current and future chapters. I hope that people are enjoying the story; don't hesitate to let me know if you are, and really don't hesitate to give me constructive criticism.

http://www.orionstarmedia.com/foreststory/chapter_eight.html

2 comments:

Elly said...

I'm honestly hanging on every word. I am witholding comments or "criticism" because I don't want to take stuff out of context... rest assured I am excited to be reading it!!!

Elly said...

ooooh the plot thickens.....